Posted by Bruggetje 3 months ago Report

Damm this looks nice wish i was vored that way :3

Posted by RedInstead 3 months ago Report

It's a life changing experience

Posted by Bruggetje 3 months ago Report

In my case more like a life ending experience XD

Posted by RedInstead 3 months ago Report

we'll put you to good use don't worry >;3

Posted by Bruggetje 3 months ago Report

I dont doubt that haha ;)

Posted by ThatBrassyGuy 3 months ago Report

JHJREKLD

JESUS THIS IS SO FUCKING GOOD I LOVE IT YOU AIN'T JUST PUSHING MY BUTTONS YOU'RE SMASHING THEM WITH A SLEDGEHAMMER

Posted by RedInstead 3 months ago Report

Thank you xD

Posted by Pew 3 months ago Report

I wanna go like that too...

Posted by Perodian 3 months ago Report

Maybe if he actually struggled he would have stood a chance. More of a chance, anyways.

Posted by TrainerKatrine 3 months ago Report

Honestly, insane respect for the composition of the image!
Bulging throats and mid-swallow shots are 'rare' to find because they're hard as fuck to get right
Because you're usually breaking anatomy which makes it look 'off', but you've managed to make it work! Huge props for that!
I've read your thing on the final page too, and I'm sure you'll make it. It's an insane sequence, and you've got some genuine skill with this!

Posted by RedInstead 3 months ago Report

I think there's a tendency to view it as 'redundant' when you have an internal shot and a external shot of the same moment in the same page... but it serves a different purpose than just showing what's physically happening, it's about the character's perspectives

And actually in this moment they're not 100% parallel, since her choker pops off in her external shot... so there's almost a bit of movement in the scene which might be why I like it so much.

I use BIGBIG a lot as a reference for internals, not so much reference for the art style as general presentation/composition, and they do this kind of shot a lot.

Thank you! I'm excited to share some of my ideas... I think vore has a lot of potential for longer stories, with certain things I think just get better over time- and some natural narrative themes that I think go with vore pretty well

Posted by doomed 3 months ago Report

Poor Kyle , she used a biological reaction against him

Posted by nc 3 months ago Report

Don't get me wrong: I absolutely love the whole page and how you blocked all the scenes into panels. But if you'd like to discuss the subject? I had quite a hard time to "understand" the grey-ish background of panel one and I was wondering why - until I finally got it: You crossed the axis of vision here (the "optical axis). In other words your "camera" flips the side and shows the prey from the opposite side compared to all other images. :)
Aaaanyway, one half of my brain is overthinking it while the other is totally busy being pulled into the hotness of the scene. I guess I would fail to focus on an escape just as the prey does here.

Posted by RedInstead 3 months ago Report

Well I don't think SHE's flipped- You can see her skirt, and her hair over her back, so her 'butt' is facing the same direction- BUT I also can see what you mean - HE looks like he's looking back over his shoulder, but he's also clearly facing forward.. That angle with the baggy clothes definitely doesn't help

I wanted to show his face to show his reaction but like you said I didn't want to flip it so it's a different direction than all the other panels, and I was also mirroring the internals in the next page that I think I did a better job on

Posted by nc 3 months ago Report

Ah, yes, you are perfectly right. Why didn't I see it that way from the beginning? Absolutely perfect :-D You see? You are not the only one overthinking here. And showing his face is so delicious in this moment.

Posted by ryanshowseason3 3 months ago Report

This and the next page were perfection